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February 16, 2011
Only as Old by *Packeranatic presents a well-detailed snapshot of a life-altering moment, and has a truly wonderful closing line.
Featured by Halatia
Literature Text
"Frail bones predict what fragile minds can't detect,"
He trailed off slowly, "And my bones are achin'."
The air around me hung low and depressed,
Sticking to the back of my throat like a stormy syrup
I'd tried to swallow down.
I peered out the kitchen window
And caught an inklet of patched-over-grey sky;
I wondered what was in store for the day.
Impartial to the gloom outside, we stepped out onto the back porch;
Grandpa wobbled out with his cane in hand and we waited.
In the hushed stillness the trees traded birds—
Robins, swallows, whippoorwills, and cardinals.
If you squinted hard enough at the sullen shrubbery,
You could spot the caterpillar creeping to the underside of the leaf.
That's when I looked at Grandpa,
And saw through his eyes nature receding
At his prescience of a storm.
"Grandpa, how do you always know?"
He chuckled and simply said: "The world tells me."
It was left at that, but years later I have found
That the world is only as old as the person to whom you speak.
Grandpa left me on that porch that day, with myself and the rousing thunder;
And I watched as the world around me grew younger.
He trailed off slowly, "And my bones are achin'."
The air around me hung low and depressed,
Sticking to the back of my throat like a stormy syrup
I'd tried to swallow down.
I peered out the kitchen window
And caught an inklet of patched-over-grey sky;
I wondered what was in store for the day.
Impartial to the gloom outside, we stepped out onto the back porch;
Grandpa wobbled out with his cane in hand and we waited.
In the hushed stillness the trees traded birds—
Robins, swallows, whippoorwills, and cardinals.
If you squinted hard enough at the sullen shrubbery,
You could spot the caterpillar creeping to the underside of the leaf.
That's when I looked at Grandpa,
And saw through his eyes nature receding
At his prescience of a storm.
"Grandpa, how do you always know?"
He chuckled and simply said: "The world tells me."
It was left at that, but years later I have found
That the world is only as old as the person to whom you speak.
Grandpa left me on that porch that day, with myself and the rousing thunder;
And I watched as the world around me grew younger.
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1.
Yellowed autumns crinkled under thumb
as I picked away at language long lost
depicting us on a boat run.
I was stuck in an infinite regression-
memories twisted and turned and
denoted turbulence of last excursions.
The authorship is creased,
writing spirals into
regressive loops.
2.
I have come back from the end of the world,
accompanied by the sounds
of a soft murmur and the ever-pressed newspaper clippings
of an expeditions trek into an October breeze.
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embracing the steam coddled galley of our
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This poem means too much to me to see it rejected yet again. So I present to you my most precious poetic possession.
Words to know:
qualm - a physical feeling of foreboding, aka gut feeling
prescience - foresight
Written by Nic Swaner. To claim otherwise is plagiarism.
Oh my goodness, a DD! Thank you Halatia for featuring!
Words to know:
qualm - a physical feeling of foreboding, aka gut feeling
prescience - foresight
Written by Nic Swaner. To claim otherwise is plagiarism.
Oh my goodness, a DD! Thank you Halatia for featuring!
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What a beautiful poem